The following is something I wrote (with all the misspellings and errors kept in) for "Writing" in my fourth grade class...enjoy!
My Easter Bunny Adventure
One Easter morning I woke up and looked in my Easter basket and there was a big chocolate egg. I started to eat it and then I got this strange feeling in my stomach.
Then all of a sudden POP! I looked in the mirror "AHH!" "I'm a bunny!" I didn't know what to tell my parents! I went to the living room, I looked at my mom and then at my dad. "AHH!" "Get that bunny out of here! I'm allergic to bunnies!", screeched my mom. "Shoo, scat!", my dad yelled and kicked me out the window. "AHH!" THUMP! I have to find a way to get back into the house. I thought to myself. Then I looked at the hole in the door for the dog. "Aha!" I hopped over to the door. Then I jumped in the house with one simple leap. Once I got inside there was another bunny waiting for me. "Who are you?", I asked. "Let me guess. The Easter bunny!" "Right.", he said. "What did you put in that egg?" "A special formula. I put it in for a special reason. I need you to go to the Buena Vista Mall and pretend you're the Easter bunny and give out candy.", he said. "No way!" "Well suit yourself.", he said as he started to walk away. "Wait a minute. If I do this will you show me how to get back to myself again?", I asked. "Yes but you have to do the job first."
I hopped to the Buena Vista Mall, and there was a huge crowd waiting for the Easter bunny. (or me) I hopped over to the crowd and started to hand out candies to everyone. As soon as all the people were gone, I hopped back to my house. There was the Easter bunny waiting for me. "Well, are you going to tell me?" "There is another special chocolate egg in your basket. If you eat it you will turn back to yourself again. But hurry your mom is coming." I hopped over to my basket and started to eat the egg. Then all of a sudden POP!
"I'm myself again!", I yelled out of happiness. "What are you yelling about?", my mom asked. "It's a LONG story!!"
And the morral of this story is never eat an Easter egg without letting your parents check it!!"
Believe it or not, my teacher thought this story was so fabulous it was posted on a board in the school. Also, both of the double exclamation marks at the end were used to draw goofy smileys.
This makes my heart happy.
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haha! Cute!!! And to think, I'll be teaching 4th grade! :)
ReplyDeleteI know we had 5th together; who was your 4th grade teacher? (Don't hate me if I should know!)
Wow, I gotta say that I did not see that moral coming. Brilliant. I have no idea where it is but I wrote a "book" about my dog disappearing in kindergarten- well I made it up and my sister wrote it. I don't think it included any morals or surprise endings though :)
ReplyDeleteI must've been into morals back then or something. ;o) I had Mrs. Dovalina for 4th grade. I only know that because it was written on the paper. I don't even know who our 5th grade teacher was...I think she had blonde hair? All I know is that's when I met Mere and she stole my bf from me when I went on vacation. ;o)
ReplyDeleteAgh! Who did I steal? Shane? Zach? I can't think of anyone else...lol. I'm so sorry, by the way...can you ever forgive me?!
ReplyDeleteOh, and our 5th grade teacher was Mrs. Robinette! I loved her. :)
I'm pretty sure it was Shane...but then I started "going out" with David, so it was all cool. He was much more my speed anyway. I mean, no! I'll never forgive you! I'll hate you forever! ;o) Man those were some fun times! Yeah, Mrs. Robinette was pretty cool. I just remember that journal we had to write in everyday...and our crazy classmates. Hmmmm...I wonder where they are now... *head cocked, hand to chin in thought*
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